Fools in Fiction


My brave girl’s quest is a fool’s errand, but I’m proud of her spirit.

– Abram Abernathy, The Revisionary

Fool. The word can be a loaded insult or a joking comment. It can have the intent to correct or ring with resigned sadness.

In The Revisionary, Portia’s father describes her plan to rescue Darius as a “fool’s errand,” and in doing so, implies the futility of her cause. Although she may be short-sighted, he still admires her determination.

Fools in fiction (and real life) are complicated people. They may or may not fit the ordinary definition of a person who lacks sense or good judgment.

The simple fool

The easiest to spot is the simple fool. Perhaps the character lived a spoiled or sheltered childhood and now must cope with a sudden crisis. The first who comes to mind is Scarlett O’Hara in Gone with the Wind. Accustomed to always getting her way, she doesn’t know how to react when Ashley Wilkes, the man she thinks she loves, rejects her. As a result, she makes a series of reckless choices.

“Fools” like Scarlett have the potential to grow, learn from their mistakes, or recognize they have missed the big picture (marks of a dynamic or developing character). This type of growth is what Portia’s father hopes will help his daughter come to terms with the ugly reality of their situation.

The other alternative for the naive character is to prove stubbornly foolish and let the consequences of their choices destroy them (tragic character).

The satirical fool

In classic literature, the fool served as a stock “jester” character, but Shakespeare often used the fool’s role ironically as a spokesperson of truth. For example, the clown Feste in Twelfth Night is anything but a dim-wit. Although his occupation confines him to speaking in jest, he uses his “foolery” to reveal flashes of shrewdness and truth.

For example, he enters a verbal sparring match with the Lady Olivia, who is mourning the presumed death of her brother.

Clo. Good madonna, why mournest thou?
Oliv. Good fool, for my brother’s death.
Clo. I think his soul is in hell, madonna.
Oliv. I know his soul is in heaven, fool.
Clo. The more fool, madonna, to mourn for your brother’s soul
being in heaven. — Take away the fool, gentlemen.

Clearly, Feste is anything but a fool. In fact, he may be wiser, at least initially, than the main characters themselves.

However, there is a third kind of fool. We can also learn from this person, but we must beware his dangerous qualities.

The self-destructive fool

“My professor … He doesn’t want me asking questions,” I whisper. “But I have so many.” – Portia, The Revisionary

Professor Mortimer teaches Portia’s Simulation class and cruelly punishes those who suggest they can learn from the past civilization. By forcing students to think a certain way, he limits them from actually discovering the truth.

The Bible has much to say about this type of fool.

The fear of the Lord is the beginning of knowledge; fools despise wisdom and instruction. – Proverbs 1:7 (ESV)

The book of Proverbs paints a clear picture of self-destructive fools and warns others to avoid their pitfalls:

  • They hate knowledge (Proverbs 1:22)
  • They are complacent (Proverbs 1:32)
  • They say slanderous things (Proverbs 10:18)
  • They will destroy themselves (Proverbs 10:21)
  • They see themselves as “right” and justify themselves (Proverbs 12:15)
  • They have a quick temper (Proverbs 14:17)

Lessons from fools

If we can recognize these types of “fools” in fiction, we can also be more aware when we encounter them in our actual lives. Beyond that, we can recognize any foolish tendencies in ourselves.

That’s the beauty of fiction. Although it’s primary purpose is to evoke an emotional response in the the reader (typically to entertain), it also serves a second purpose: to reveal truth through story.

Think of the most memorable fiction characters, fool or otherwise, that you’ve encountered. What makes them memorable? What lessons do their stories teach?

~ Kristen



Fools in Fiction: Can you spot them? – @kjhogrefe (Click to Tweet)

What fictional fools can teach us about real life – @kjhogrefe (Click to Tweet)

Character Profile: Portia Abernathy

portia-quote-1Do you have a favorite fictional character? If you solved the trivia quiz from a few weeks back, you discovered one of mine.

Portia is Shakespeare’s heroine in his comedy, The Merchant of Venice. This rich heiress of Belmont faces (what she believes to be) a miserable problem: she cannot choose whom she will marry. Her late father set up a lottery system using three chests of gold, silver, and lead. The man who discerns the meaning of each chest and chooses the right one will win Portia’s hand.

But she is anything but a damsel-in-distress. When her eventual fiancé Bassanio tries to rescue his good friend from a spiteful lender, she disguises herself as a lawyer in the case. In one of literature’s most classic court scenes, she saves Bassanio’s friend and teaches her fiancé a lesson about keeping his promise. (I can’t give away the story; you’ll have to read it yourself.)

Portia in The Revisionary

Thank you, Shakespeare, for letting me borrow your tenacious gal’s name. Would you like to get to know her? Here are a few details that will help paint a sketch.


He [Dad] figured that if I can’t run from danger, I should at least be able to aim at it … There are some things in life no one can outrun.

  • Name: Portia Abernathy
  • Age: 19
  • Height: 4’11”, possible stunted growth from childhood trauma
  • Hair color: platinum blonde
  • Eyes: Blue
  • Back injury prevents her from thriving in physical education classes. Undergrad adviser awarded her an alternative protection elective; consequently, she carries a Taser.
Personality profile:

“Miss Abernathy, your draft is impressive, but then, intelligence runs in your family. So does bad blood.” – Eliab, Commanding Gage at the Crystal Globe University

  • Nickname: Cotton (see hair)
  • Intellectual achievement marks her as a draft candidate.
  • Creative outlet: writing rhymes
  • Relationship status: single and refused compatibility testing (determined not to become a victim of the system like her sister).
  • Favorite color: autumn sky
  • Favorite animal: firefly

“To most, the man across the table from me is nothing but a broken, old Tooler with knobby fingers and dirty nails. To me, he is everything left that’s kind and lovely in the world.” – Portia on her father

  • Father: Abram Abernathy, professional Tooler
  • Brother: Darius Abernathy, serving a life sentence on a western satellite for refusing his draft
  • Mother and Sister: deceased

Cover Reveal: Coming Soon

You’ll have a chance to learn more of Portia’s backstory with a free novelette (bonus feature) I’ll be giving away for those who sign up to pre-order The Revisionary. Look for more details on both the novelette and pre-order information later this spring.

If you missed the first post about The Revisionary, its setting, and premise, be sure to visit my book page.

In the meantime, I’ve added a countdown on my site, because I’ll be sharing my cover (and the story behind it) on April 4 to celebrate my birthday with you!!

So … Who’s your favorite fictional character and why? I’d love to hear.




Character Profile: Portia Abernathy – @kjhogrefe (Click to Tweet)

What Shakespeare and my heroine have in common – @kjhogrefe (Click to Tweet)